uhh fixed the consultation ending, added in assets etc.

Word count: 5,664 words

game/achievements.rpy

@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ define scare_tactics = Achievement(
 define very_loud_quitting = Achievement(
     name=_("Very Loud Quitting"),
     id="very_loud_quitting",
-    description=_("You incited all the faculty into quitting."),
+    description=_("You forced all the faculty into quitting."),
     locked_image=Transform("gui/window_icon.png", matrixcolor=SepiaMatrix()),
     unlocked_image=Transform("gui/window_icon.png", matrixcolor=SepiaMatrix()),
     hidden=True,
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ define hedgehog_dilemma_solved = Achievement(
 define retroactive = Achievement(
     name=_("Retroactive"),
     id="retroactive",
-    description=_("You embraced change."),
+    description=_("You made your decision."),
     locked_image=Transform("gui/window_icon.png", matrixcolor=SepiaMatrix()),
     unlocked_image=Transform("gui/window_icon.png", matrixcolor=SepiaMatrix()),
     hidden=True,
@@ -355,7 +355,9 @@ screen ending_gallery():
     ## Otherwise, if you'd like this to be independent of the game menu,
     ## use the following:
     if main_menu:
-        textbutton _("Return") action Return() align (1.0, 1.0)
+        textbutton _("Return") action Return():
+            style "return_button"
+            align (1.0, 1.0)
 
     viewport:
         mousewheel True draggable True pagekeys True

game/options.rpy

@@ -79,7 +79,9 @@ define config.has_voice = True
 ## the player is at the main menu. This file will continue playing into the
 ## game, until it is stopped or another file is played.
 
-# define config.main_menu_music = "main-menu-theme.ogg"
+## Music that is played while the user is at the main menu.
+
+define config.main_menu_music = "audio/main_menu.mp3"
 
 
 ## Transitions #################################################################

game/screens/game_menu.rpy

@@ -68,6 +68,7 @@ style return_button:
     xpos 60
     yalign 1.0
     yoffset -45
+    activate_sound "return.mp3"
 
 style game_menu_viewport:
     xsize config.screen_width-420

game/script.rpy

@@ -230,7 +230,6 @@ label start:
         day = 0
         next_label = ""
 
-
         # CHOICE VARIABLES #
         attacked_student = False
         garden_of_the_sun_lecture = False
@@ -240,11 +239,12 @@ label start:
 
     label laozi:
         scene bg black
-        $ renpy.pause(2, True)
+        stop music
+        $ renpy.pause(1.5)
         # show text "      {font=m3x6.ttf}For this reason the great man dwells in the thick, and does not rest with the thin.{/font}\n{font=m6x11.ttf}He dwells in the {color=#cc2222}fruit{/color}, and does not rest with the {color=#ffff00}flower{/font}{/color}.\n                                                                 {font=m3x6.ttf}- Laozi, Tao Te Ching{/font}" at truecenter
         show text "      {rt}For this reason the great man dwells in the thick, and does not rest with the thin.{/rt}\nHe dwells in the {color=#cc2222}fruit{/color}, and does not rest with the {color=#ffff00}flower{/color}.\n                                                                   {rt}- Laozi, Tao Te Ching{/rt}" at truecenter
         with dissolve
-        $ renpy.pause(7, True)
+        $ renpy.pause(6)
         hide text
         with dissolve
 
@@ -284,11 +284,19 @@ label start:
         # TEXT  Y
         # STAGE N
         # VAR   Y
-        scene bg auditorium
 
-        show yuuka happy:
+        image audi_front:
+            "bg auditorium front.png"
+
+        show audi_front zorder 150
+
+        show bg auditorium back behind audi_front
+
+        $ renpy.pause(2)
+                
+        show yuuka happy with fade:
             xalign 0.5
-            yalign 0.99
+            yalign 0.5
         
         python: # <- Remove
             '''
@@ -322,7 +330,12 @@ label start:
         # TEXT  Y
         # STAGE N
         # VAR   Y
-        scene bg redfield with fade
+
+        play music tension if_changed
+
+        scene bg ruinedfield with fade
+
+        $ renpy.pause(2)
 
         show yuuka happy:
             xalign 0.5
@@ -334,7 +347,7 @@ label start:
 
         yuuka  "{i}Spring. It was the season for blooming petals, and I had come to one of my second-favorite flower fields in Gensokyo.{/i}" (cb_name="")
 
-        yuuka "This used to be a field of red buckwheat flowers, growing ever so softly towards the sky blue."
+        yuuka "This used to be a gorgeous field of sunflowers, flowering red buckwheat, growing ever so softly towards the sky blue."
 
         show yuuka happy:
             ease 1.8 ypos 1280
@@ -1714,7 +1727,7 @@ label faculty:
 
                 yuuka "{i}I became very popular with the students however.{/i}" (cb_name="")
 
-                yuuka "{i}That's why as your sitting in your seats, waiting for Professor Okazaki to sweep in and replace me, the menace you welcomed in,{/i}" (cb_name="")
+                yuuka "{i}That's why as you're sitting in your seats, waiting for Professor Okazaki to sweep in and replace me, the menace you welcomed in,{/i}" (cb_name="")
                 
                 yuuka "{i}Just know that she won't be making it.{/i}" (cb_name="")
                 
@@ -1741,7 +1754,15 @@ label faculty:
 
             jump day_transition
         else:
-            yuuka "{i}As you all know, the exams were delayed.{/i}" (cb_name="")
+            yuuka "{i}The students took to it well.{/i}" (cb_name="")
+
+            yuuka "{i}We were correct that they had been prepared throughout the semester.{/i}" (cb_name="")
+
+            yuuka "{i}And by that we mean they crammed like their lives depended on it.{/i}" (cb_name="")
+
+            yuuka "{i}A sentiment that must be familiar to you all.{/i}" (cb_name="")
+
+            yuuka "{i}The day fast approached and I had my own preparations to do...{/i}" (cb_name="")
 
             $ next_label = "exam"
 
@@ -1808,6 +1829,8 @@ label penultimate_presentation:
 label finale:
     # the you finished enough of the game idgaf route
 
+    # it should happen in the garden of the sun
+
     return
 
 label day_transition:

game/styles.rpy

@@ -72,6 +72,7 @@ style gui_text:
 style button:
     xysize (None, None)
     padding (0, 0)
+    activate_sound "click.mp3"
 
 style button_text:
     is gui_text