v1.0.1 - A few grammatical corrections
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@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ SOCRATES: I've discovered that you can use drawing compasses to make a hook.
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SOCRATES: Tie it to a string and it'll hook onto any garment left unguarded.
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DIOTIMA: *This is Socrates, a young student of mine. However, he isn't from a wealthy family like most of them so he makes due however he can.*
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DIOTIMA: *This is Socrates, a young student of mine. However, he isn't from a wealthy family like most of them so he makes do however he can.*
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DIOTIMA: Clever. Not at all moral or right though.
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@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ DIOTIMA: That is a good question. You see…
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DIOTIMA stumbles, seemingly slipping on nothing. Socrates moves to help her but she finds her footing.
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SOCRATES: Are you alright?
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SOCRATES: Are you all right?
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DIOTIMA: Yes, yes. I've just been lightheaded recently.
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@ -981,7 +981,7 @@ REIMU: Get something for yourself if you wanna hang around.
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DIOTIMA: Very well.
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Diotima, now translucent and with an ectoplasmic tail where he legs used to be, floats over to an juicy, unclaimed skewer of grilled lamprey. Her hand passes straight through it. She's heartbroken.
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Diotima, now translucent and with an ectoplasmic tail where her legs used to be, floats over to an juicy, unclaimed skewer of grilled lamprey. Her hand passes straight through it. She's heartbroken.
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DIOTIMA: Oh. [[What exactly can I "get for myself"?|INTERLUDE 3]]
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@ -1234,7 +1234,7 @@ REIMU: Close, I'm its shrine maiden.
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REIMU: We're in the same boat, you and me.
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Reimu swirls her cups, staring into its rippling waves before taking another swig.
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Reimu swirls her cup. She into its rippling waves before taking another swig.
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REIMU: We've got no idea about the god we're serving. Just trying to make do.
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@ -1248,7 +1248,7 @@ DIOTIMA: While I'm here, I'd like to ask you, if you don't mind, abo
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REIMU: Love?
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DIOTIMA: Love. You already know it was an old passion of mind as a philosopher; exploring the topic of love.
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DIOTIMA: Love. You already know it was an old passion of mine as a philosopher; exploring the topic of love.
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DIOTIMA: I want to know what is love, definitively.
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@ -1260,7 +1260,7 @@ REIMU: Hmm. I'll indulge you. [[Here's what I think of love.|REIMU 2]]
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background-repeat: no-repeat;
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background-size: cover;
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}
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[continued]</tw-passagedata><tw-passagedata pid="31" name="YOUMU 1" tags="" position="2750,425" size="100,100">cred: cred - 1
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[continued]s</tw-passagedata><tw-passagedata pid="31" name="YOUMU 1" tags="" position="2750,425" size="100,100">cred: cred - 1
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--
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{ambient sound: 'youmu2'}
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@ -1341,9 +1341,9 @@ SUIKA: Hooh. You don't know?
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DIOTIMA: I do not.
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SUIKA: No, you think you do. I can see through you and your facade of ignorance.
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SUIKA: No, you think you do. I can see through you and your façade of ignorance.
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DIOTIMA: I have no such facade.
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DIOTIMA: I have no such façade.
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SUIKA: You're a proud one alright. Just not honest about it. [[Let me show you how honesty's done.|SUIKA 2]]
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@ -1515,7 +1515,7 @@ Your credibility is UNDOUBTABLE.
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[continued]
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Diotima focuses her ghostly energies on Youmu... doing so takes a toll on her and she'll lose her presence while trying.
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She appears to be fearful of Diotima. She'd be easy to enter but fighting off her phantom half be VERY, VERY draining. It'd be best to end things fast.
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She appears to be fearful of Diotima. She'd be easy to enter but fighting off her phantom half will be VERY, VERY draining. It'd be best to end things fast.
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**Pick an idea to attack her with.**
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<ul>
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@ -2065,7 +2065,7 @@ inventory.indexOf(newItem) === -1 ? inventory.push(newItem) : console.log("
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Inside she finds an idea:
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- We all wear facades.
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- We all wear façades.
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[[Leave.|HUB]]
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@ -2078,7 +2078,7 @@ Inside she finds an idea:
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[continued]
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[JavaScript]
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var newItem = "We all wear facades.";
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var newItem = "We all wear façades.";
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inventory.indexOf(newItem) === -1 ? inventory.push(newItem) : console.log("This idea already exists");
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[continued]</tw-passagedata><tw-passagedata pid="51" name="SUIKA 2" tags="" position="2250,425" size="100,100">cred (cred < 5): cred + 1
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@ -2100,7 +2100,7 @@ SUIKA: It means being vulnerable and opening up to risks.
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[continued]
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SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can bite ya!
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SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a façade! Love is authentic and it can bite ya!
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[[QUESTION|SUIKA 2c]] or
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[[PRESENT|SUIKA 2 PRESENT c]]
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@ -2260,7 +2260,7 @@ SUIKA: It means being vulnerable and opening up to risks.
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<ul>
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[JavaScript]
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inventory.forEach(function(value, index){
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if(value == "Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries." || value == "We all wear facades.")
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if(value == "Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries." || value == "We all wear façades.")
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{
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write("<li><a href=\"javascript:void(0)\" data-cb-go=\"SUIKA 4\">" + value + "</a></li>");
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}
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@ -2307,7 +2307,7 @@ DIOTIMA: It just doesn't seem relevant. We're not talking about me.
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SUIKA: I think it's very relevant.
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DIOTIMA: Could you at least clarify what you mean by facade?
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DIOTIMA: Could you at least clarify what you mean by façade?
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SUIKA: Nah.
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@ -2345,7 +2345,7 @@ SUIKA: Hm. Sure! It's no fight but at least you're making it interesting
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[if cred < 0]
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{embed passage: 'HUB LOSS'}
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[continued]
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SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can bite ya!
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SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a façade! Love is authentic and it can bite ya!
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[[RETURN|SUIKA 2]]
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@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@ SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can b
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<ul>
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[JavaScript]
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inventory.forEach(function(value, index){
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if(value == "Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries." || value == "We all wear facades.")
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if(value == "Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries." || value == "We all wear façades.")
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{
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write("<li><a href=\"javascript:void(0)\" data-cb-go=\"SUIKA 4\">" + value + "</a></li>");
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}
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@ -2397,7 +2397,7 @@ DIOTIMA: I believe that love is state of order and coexistence.
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DIOTIMA: It means putting up boundaries and picking your battles.
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DIOTIMA: You must love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can bite you!
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DIOTIMA: You must love while wearing a façade! Love is authentic and it can bite you!
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Diotima concludes her argument.
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@ -2413,11 +2413,11 @@ DIOTIMA: Hm. Breakups are merely the end of order. Manipulation and similar exam
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SUIKA: Fine. I'll admit I was overeager there. What was your third point again?
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DIOTIMA: It was, "you must love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can bite you!"
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DIOTIMA: It was, "you must love while wearing a façade! Love is authentic and it can bite you!"
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SUIKA: Well isn't that already contradicting itself? Love is authentic but has a facade?
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SUIKA: Well isn't that already contradicting itself? Love is authentic but has a façade?
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DIOTIMA: Not quite. I said that the act of loving needs a facade in order to protect one's self from love's dangerous elements.
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DIOTIMA: Not quite. I said that the act of loving needs a façade in order to protect one's self from love's dangerous elements.
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SUIKA: Hm. But that goes for all things in life, no? You humans put up walls around yourself because you're weak inside.
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@ -2551,8 +2551,8 @@ if (inventory.indexOf("Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries."
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inventory.splice(inventory.indexOf("Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries."), 1);
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}
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if (inventory.indexOf("We all wear facades.") > -1) {
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inventory.splice(inventory.indexOf("We all wear facades."), 1);
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if (inventory.indexOf("We all wear façades.") > -1) {
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inventory.splice(inventory.indexOf("We all wear façades."), 1);
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}
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var newItem = "Love is selfish.";
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@ -3352,7 +3352,7 @@ DIOTIMA: Though we can never reach it, we know there is love and that love is go
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DIOTIMA: We can tell instinctively that it must be, even if it is hard to say why.
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DIOTIMA: It can come in many forms, it can be calm, it can be wild, it can steadfast, it can be fickle.
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DIOTIMA: It can come in many forms, it can be calm, it can be wild, it can be steadfast, it can be fickle.
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DIOTIMA: But despite evidence to the contrary, I think we can both agree love is good, right?
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@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ SOCRATES: I've discovered that you can use drawing compasses to make a hook.
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SOCRATES: Tie it to a string and it'll hook onto any garment left unguarded.
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DIOTIMA: *This is Socrates, a young student of mine. However, he isn't from a wealthy family like most of them so he makes due however he can.*
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DIOTIMA: *This is Socrates, a young student of mine. However, he isn't from a wealthy family like most of them so he makes do however he can.*
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DIOTIMA: Clever. Not at all moral or right though.
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@ -871,7 +871,7 @@ DIOTIMA: That is a good question. You see…
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DIOTIMA stumbles, seemingly slipping on nothing. Socrates moves to help her but she finds her footing.
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SOCRATES: Are you alright?
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SOCRATES: Are you all right?
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DIOTIMA: Yes, yes. I've just been lightheaded recently.
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@ -962,7 +962,7 @@ REIMU: Get something for yourself if you wanna hang around.
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DIOTIMA: Very well.
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Diotima, now translucent and with an ectoplasmic tail where he legs used to be, floats over to an juicy, unclaimed skewer of grilled lamprey. Her hand passes straight through it. She's heartbroken.
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Diotima, now translucent and with an ectoplasmic tail where her legs used to be, floats over to an juicy, unclaimed skewer of grilled lamprey. Her hand passes straight through it. She's heartbroken.
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DIOTIMA: Oh. [[What exactly can I "get for myself"?|INTERLUDE 3]]
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@ -1215,7 +1215,7 @@ REIMU: Close, I'm its shrine maiden.
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REIMU: We're in the same boat, you and me.
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Reimu swirls her cups, staring into its rippling waves before taking another swig.
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Reimu swirls her cup. She into its rippling waves before taking another swig.
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REIMU: We've got no idea about the god we're serving. Just trying to make do.
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@ -1229,7 +1229,7 @@ DIOTIMA: While I'm here, I'd like to ask you, if you don't mind, abo
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REIMU: Love?
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DIOTIMA: Love. You already know it was an old passion of mind as a philosopher; exploring the topic of love.
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DIOTIMA: Love. You already know it was an old passion of mine as a philosopher; exploring the topic of love.
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DIOTIMA: I want to know what is love, definitively.
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@ -1241,7 +1241,7 @@ REIMU: Hmm. I'll indulge you. [[Here's what I think of love.|REIMU 2]]
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background-repeat: no-repeat;
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background-size: cover;
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}
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[continued]</tw-passagedata><tw-passagedata pid="31" name="YOUMU 1" tags="" position="2750,425" size="100,100">cred: cred - 1
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[continued]s</tw-passagedata><tw-passagedata pid="31" name="YOUMU 1" tags="" position="2750,425" size="100,100">cred: cred - 1
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--
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{ambient sound: 'youmu2'}
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@ -1322,9 +1322,9 @@ SUIKA: Hooh. You don't know?
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DIOTIMA: I do not.
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SUIKA: No, you think you do. I can see through you and your facade of ignorance.
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SUIKA: No, you think you do. I can see through you and your façade of ignorance.
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DIOTIMA: I have no such facade.
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DIOTIMA: I have no such façade.
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SUIKA: You're a proud one alright. Just not honest about it. [[Let me show you how honesty's done.|SUIKA 2]]
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@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@ Your credibility is UNDOUBTABLE.
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[continued]
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Diotima focuses her ghostly energies on Youmu... doing so takes a toll on her and she'll lose her presence while trying.
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She appears to be fearful of Diotima. She'd be easy to enter but fighting off her phantom half be VERY, VERY draining. It'd be best to end things fast.
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She appears to be fearful of Diotima. She'd be easy to enter but fighting off her phantom half will be VERY, VERY draining. It'd be best to end things fast.
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**Pick an idea to attack her with.**
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<ul>
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@ -2046,7 +2046,7 @@ inventory.indexOf(newItem) === -1 ? inventory.push(newItem) : console.log("
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Inside she finds an idea:
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- We all wear facades.
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- We all wear façades.
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[[Leave.|HUB]]
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[continued]
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[JavaScript]
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var newItem = "We all wear facades.";
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var newItem = "We all wear façades.";
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inventory.indexOf(newItem) === -1 ? inventory.push(newItem) : console.log("This idea already exists");
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[continued]</tw-passagedata><tw-passagedata pid="51" name="SUIKA 2" tags="" position="2250,425" size="100,100">cred (cred < 5): cred + 1
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@ -2081,7 +2081,7 @@ SUIKA: It means being vulnerable and opening up to risks.
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[continued]
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SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can bite ya!
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SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a façade! Love is authentic and it can bite ya!
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[[QUESTION|SUIKA 2c]] or
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[[PRESENT|SUIKA 2 PRESENT c]]
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@ -2241,7 +2241,7 @@ SUIKA: It means being vulnerable and opening up to risks.
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<ul>
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[JavaScript]
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inventory.forEach(function(value, index){
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if(value == "Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries." || value == "We all wear facades.")
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if(value == "Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries." || value == "We all wear façades.")
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{
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write("<li><a href=\"javascript:void(0)\" data-cb-go=\"SUIKA 4\">" + value + "</a></li>");
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}
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SUIKA: I think it's very relevant.
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DIOTIMA: Could you at least clarify what you mean by facade?
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DIOTIMA: Could you at least clarify what you mean by façade?
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SUIKA: Nah.
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@ -2326,7 +2326,7 @@ SUIKA: Hm. Sure! It's no fight but at least you're making it interesting
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[if cred < 0]
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{embed passage: 'HUB LOSS'}
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[continued]
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SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can bite ya!
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SUIKA: You can't love while wearing a façade! Love is authentic and it can bite ya!
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[[RETURN|SUIKA 2]]
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<ul>
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[JavaScript]
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inventory.forEach(function(value, index){
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if(value == "Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries." || value == "We all wear facades.")
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if(value == "Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries." || value == "We all wear façades.")
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{
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write("<li><a href=\"javascript:void(0)\" data-cb-go=\"SUIKA 4\">" + value + "</a></li>");
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}
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DIOTIMA: It means putting up boundaries and picking your battles.
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DIOTIMA: You must love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can bite you!
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DIOTIMA: You must love while wearing a façade! Love is authentic and it can bite you!
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Diotima concludes her argument.
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@ -2394,11 +2394,11 @@ DIOTIMA: Hm. Breakups are merely the end of order. Manipulation and similar exam
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SUIKA: Fine. I'll admit I was overeager there. What was your third point again?
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DIOTIMA: It was, "you must love while wearing a facade! Love is authentic and it can bite you!"
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DIOTIMA: It was, "you must love while wearing a façade! Love is authentic and it can bite you!"
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SUIKA: Well isn't that already contradicting itself? Love is authentic but has a facade?
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SUIKA: Well isn't that already contradicting itself? Love is authentic but has a façade?
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DIOTIMA: Not quite. I said that the act of loving needs a facade in order to protect one's self from love's dangerous elements.
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DIOTIMA: Not quite. I said that the act of loving needs a façade in order to protect one's self from love's dangerous elements.
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SUIKA: Hm. But that goes for all things in life, no? You humans put up walls around yourself because you're weak inside.
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inventory.splice(inventory.indexOf("Humans cope with danger by setting boundaries."), 1);
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}
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if (inventory.indexOf("We all wear facades.") > -1) {
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inventory.splice(inventory.indexOf("We all wear facades."), 1);
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if (inventory.indexOf("We all wear façades.") > -1) {
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inventory.splice(inventory.indexOf("We all wear façades."), 1);
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}
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var newItem = "Love is selfish.";
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@ -3333,7 +3333,7 @@ DIOTIMA: Though we can never reach it, we know there is love and that love is go
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DIOTIMA: We can tell instinctively that it must be, even if it is hard to say why.
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DIOTIMA: It can come in many forms, it can be calm, it can be wild, it can steadfast, it can be fickle.
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DIOTIMA: It can come in many forms, it can be calm, it can be wild, it can be steadfast, it can be fickle.
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DIOTIMA: But despite evidence to the contrary, I think we can both agree love is good, right?
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